tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5752265769980657739.post2222177859861166712..comments2023-04-01T03:54:48.460-04:00Comments on Clothdragon: Ever and EverClothDragonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07542830590515695754noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5752265769980657739.post-16774644696861427502010-04-23T22:19:35.829-04:002010-04-23T22:19:35.829-04:00Thank you. I completely intend to keep going on th...Thank you. I completely intend to keep going on this one once I get this short out of my head and onto paper. I've been working on it three days and the ending is staying just out of reach.ClothDragonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07542830590515695754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5752265769980657739.post-17449814219701904892010-04-23T22:13:47.067-04:002010-04-23T22:13:47.067-04:00Wow, this is awesome. I may not be a writer, but a...Wow, this is awesome. I may not be a writer, but as a reader, I know what I like. I really like this so far. I think it's good that the guy is horrified about what he did, even though the girl doesn't seem to be bothered by it. The way you wrote the background and introduced both characters makes it seem much more romantic and about love and not a S&M scene.LoriDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236198254073246550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5752265769980657739.post-75138214308150597622010-04-20T16:03:13.491-04:002010-04-20T16:03:13.491-04:00Thanks. I'm glad it seems to be working so far...Thanks. I'm glad it seems to be working so far.<br /><br />And I think it helps that he does feel like a rapist -- and it horrifies him.<br /><br />The rest should fall into semi-typical romance territory, her learning the new world, them learning each other, eventually falling in love, and even more eventually, admitting it. But this part had to work out reasonably for the rest to work at all.ClothDragonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07542830590515695754noreply@blogger.com